Kamane Pinku full body art

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    Kamane Pinku full body art

    Post by Tsumanne on Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:26 am

    Spoiler:

    I didn't wanna bother with shading it xD but yes, this is Pinku's outfit design.

    I can has critiquesplz?

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    Re: Kamane Pinku full body art

    Post by smeen on Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:08 am

    OMGH, her outfit is adorable! Maybe you can make her hair a shade lighter because it looks the same shade of pink as her sleeves... But that's all the critique I can think of.

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    Re: Kamane Pinku full body art

    Post by Starfruit on Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:08 am

    It's really cute, but I think it needs a bit more flavour... maybe add a few patterns? Stripes would be nice here and there, I think~ :3

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    Re: Kamane Pinku full body art

    Post by Chasing Fireflies on Thu Jul 01, 2010 10:54 am

    S-So cute~! ;w; Her dress looks a bit plain, though, I agree with Starfruit, maybe some patterns would spice it up a bit? Polka dots, maybe! =D

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    Re: Kamane Pinku full body art

    Post by scarfu on Thu Jul 01, 2010 4:12 pm

    I think that her colors are looking a bit monotonous... Like, they all... are basically the same shade of pink with lighter colors, and that looks kind of bland to me? XDDD; So maybe add some contrasting colors like white, I think that would do her some good. =u=b

    Otherwise, she's cute~ =w=

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    Re: Kamane Pinku full body art

    Post by PeppermintCereal on Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:12 pm

    Ummm... Pink was the main idea for her clothing colour... And the colours looked better in my head ^^"

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    Re: Kamane Pinku full body art

    Post by zin on Thu Jul 22, 2010 1:45 am

    can i makes you a box art with it =3

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    Re: Kamane Pinku full body art

    Post by MillyAqualine on Thu Jul 22, 2010 3:22 am

    She's cutie *w*

    Moreover, her dress' colour is one of my favourite shades of pink ♥

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    Re: Kamane Pinku full body art

    Post by Peachbite on Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:52 am

    It's cute BUT you need to move the eyes up. They are a little low. If you move them up she would look even better.

    GJ!

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    Re: Kamane Pinku full body art

    Post by PeppermintCereal on Thu Aug 19, 2010 2:56 am

    zinfandel wrote:can i makes you a box art with it =3

    Yes ma'am, but make her bangles gold and the pattern on her breastplate holes not pink ^^

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    Re: Kamane Pinku full body art

    Post by PeppermintCereal on Thu Aug 19, 2010 2:59 am

    Chasing Fireflies wrote:S-So cute~! ;w; Her dress looks a bit plain, though, I agree with Starfruit, maybe some patterns would spice it up a bit? Polka dots, maybe! =D

    PINKU SAYS NO.

    She hates wearing patterns, BTW.

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