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    KEI STYLE - first attempt

    Kolya-kun
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    Post by Kolya-kun Sat Jul 10, 2010 10:21 pm

    Spoiler:

    ohwesker she's leaning FFFFFFFF

    i was inspired by Yume Barauta to try it, because her KEI style picture was so prettily colored ;A;

    anyway, i want lots of critique ok?

    lots. please.

    just not on the sock-boots because they are stupid and sock-boot tastic~~~ <3

    ^__^;


    aaaaaaah her hair is angled wrong on (her) left /sob


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    moeloid
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    Post by moeloid Sat Jul 10, 2010 10:25 pm

    ...it doesn't look like KEI style, really....


    But I think this is waaaaaaaay cuter<333
    Kolya-kun
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    Post by Kolya-kun Sat Jul 10, 2010 10:28 pm

    moeloid wrote:...it doesn't look like KEI style, really....


    But I think this is waaaaaaaay cuter<333


    bfff thank you so much ;A;

    im terrible at copying styles lmaooo
    Luna Amatista
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    Post by Luna Amatista Sat Jul 10, 2010 11:52 pm

    And I thought I was an oddball for making all my drawings leaning on to a side. xD I just got rid of that, but it took ages of practicing. u_u

    Anyway. It's good, so I will point out the two minor issues I can see:
    1. The neck is too short. Unless she's kind of shrugging, which it doesn't look like because of the position of the shoulders.
    2. The left arm is too long. Besides, it is too thin as it gets closer to the elbow.

    However, you're really good - especially at coloring.
    The colors look very soft, and they blend very well together. ^^

    Good job overall~

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