Toosenbo "とおせんぼ" (Jessi Maki)

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    Kolya-kun

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    Toosenbo "とおせんぼ" (Jessi Maki)

    Post by Kolya-kun on Sun Aug 15, 2010 11:20 am




    i almost decided to shift it up an octave, since it looked a bit too low but i think she handled the low notes well :>

    the art was rushed 'cause i was going to a friends house xDD

    any critique on her voice is welcome ;o;

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    Re: Toosenbo "とおせんぼ" (Jessi Maki)

    Post by Undecided on Sun Aug 15, 2010 4:19 pm

    Though the chorus sounds weird, the rest of the song was fine, if a little lacking in emotion. She isn't too suited to this song in my opinion, it's more suited for UTAUloids with "sharper" voices (for lack of a better term).

    The voice doesn't need much critique - I can't really find a problem with it, other than needing to be more expressive (though that might be a tuning issue instead of a voice issue). It's more of the song not doing her enough justice.

    Kolya-kun

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    Re: Toosenbo "とおせんぼ" (Jessi Maki)

    Post by Kolya-kun on Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:58 pm

    ah, thank you! i'll try to find songs more suited then~ your critique is much appreciated.

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