Ready Steady Go! [Ongaku]

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    OngakuCD

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    Ready Steady Go! [Ongaku]

    Post by OngakuCD on Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:18 pm



    comment please :3.

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    Re: Ready Steady Go! [Ongaku]

    Post by koolit on Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:52 pm

    In my opinion, it sounded a little offtune...maybe. The more I listen to it, the more I'm not sure if it's offtune or it it's something else that is making it sound a little off xP
    Also, I think it could have been smoother. Some notes were sung a bit off beat. (I think editing your otos could help with that).
    There could have been a better balance in volume with the intrumental and the voice. The voice was a little loud, so maybe just lower it a bit in audacity or whatever sound program you use Wink
    Hehehe....those R's........I think you should rerecord them. They are a little too strong xP They should be a mix of an english L and R. Erm...there are actually some tutorials for prounouncing the Japanese R, so maybe check those out.

    Oh goodness, I'll shut up now xD Keep up with the effort! I like his voice, it just needs to be smoothed out a bit x)

    ._. okey, I lied, I have one last thing to say. In the intro-y part, there's no one singing xP It's probably because you don't have the UST for your utau to sing that part, but I found it a little strange since I was expecting someone to sing there (and then you can hear the awkward falsetto harmonies in the intrumental and yeah xD I just found it strange and wanted to point it out, sorry xP).

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    Re: Ready Steady Go! [Ongaku]

    Post by OngakuCD on Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:09 pm

    I don't know why I have so much trouble with the R's ( it might be because of my accent; I cant even pronounce world right ). I tried some tutorials, but it seems I cant be helped. I kinda like his funny r sounds cause it helps me identify him, and I wanted him to have an American accent.

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