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    Critique please?

    numbarr3
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    Post by numbarr3 Fri Aug 20, 2010 12:35 pm

    Can anyone give me some critique on this design, please?

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    PeppermintCereal
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    Post by PeppermintCereal Fri Aug 20, 2010 8:53 pm

    That's cool C: You draw better than me lol.

    That is my critique.
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    Post by moeloid Fri Aug 20, 2010 9:29 pm

    I think there's a little too much detail all going on at the same time. Maybe you should scrap the puffy sleeves and the bow on her leg. Just a suggestion^^'

    But the drawing still looks great!

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