Crossovers are stupid (Jarred/Hayao Crack)

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    Post by smeen on Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:31 pm

    Yes, I made this. I have no other comments.

    Spoiler:
    "So, you're playin' in a band, right?"
    "Yes."
    "You're the lead singer."
    "Yes."
    "You know, I'm a writer."
    "Oh, shut up, what's this, another crossover?"
    "Yes, the author wanted it. You already guessed?"
    "I'm not stupid..."
    Hayao crossed his arms. Jarred sighed. "I know you're not stupid hon." But Hayao was getting more annoyed by the minute. "Why? This is so cliche!" He waved his arms around. "Everybody knows that!" Jared sighed again. "This can work out, just tag along..." It had no effect. "I don't even look like him! I mean, do I have pink hair? Well?", Hayao yelled. "Well, sometimes-"
    "Shut up!"
    "Okay..."
    Jarred let his boyfriend rage for a while. He knew there was nothing that could be done when Hayao was in a mood like this. He watched Hayao walking around, talking to himself. Raging at the author. "Say, isn't the seme the grumpy one in this story?" It was out before Jarred noticed it. "Who says I'm not the seme?", came the answer. Jarred fell silent, for just some secobds. Than he started laughing loudly. "What?", Hayao yelled at him. "You cannot be the seme dear, seriously not."
    "Why not?"
    "Have you ever looked at yourself? You are uke all over, it's written over your body!"
    "It is not!"
    "Give me some chocolate sauce and it will be."
    "That's not the- What?"
    Jarred smirked. Hayao's face slowly turned into one big grin. They took each other's hands and walked into the kitchen, and somewhere a voice called out to them: "You're forgetting the plot!"
    "Shut up!"
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    Post by Haloheroine on Tue Aug 24, 2010 1:59 am

    XDDDDDDD
    Good job. *thumbs up*
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    Post by smeen on Tue Aug 24, 2010 7:53 am

    Thank you!
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    Post by Darkkira1332 on Tue Aug 24, 2010 8:29 am

    ROFL!!!!! That was a good one!!!!
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    Post by smeen on Tue Aug 24, 2010 8:47 am

    Thank you!
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    Post by irei1as on Tue Aug 24, 2010 1:01 pm

    Hmm, I didn't like this one much, sorry.
    I feel today a bit negative. Hey, you can just ignore me.

    I think the flow is a bit rough. Maybe it's because it's too laconic or, did I missed a previous chapter?
    The last lines are actually good but, really, the start and middle are too simplistic for it looking in place. It seems like the last lines were the only important part and everything else was just an excuse to get there.

    But really it may be just me with a bad day and everything looking grey.
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    Post by smeen on Wed Aug 25, 2010 10:01 am

    Neh, I was having a bad day too. I completely agree with you...

    I'm a bit sapped lately...

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