UTAU Design: Opinions and Critiques wanted!

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    Kiyone

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    UTAU Design: Opinions and Critiques wanted!

    Post by Kiyone on Thu Sep 02, 2010 6:52 pm

    I'm redesigning my UTAUloid - Kiyone Yasu.

    Her first design was this:
    http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=kiyone+yasu#/d259p6i

    A tweaked up newer version with no arm warmers and with sleeves and a longer vest:
    http://flatcake.deviantart.com/art/Walkin-Talkin-165888628?q=boost%3Apopular+kiyone+yasu&qo=4

    The newer design with have the old colour schemes and the theme of blue,gray and white.
    I'm a bit attached to those designs really. OTL

    Though,her voice doesn't fit with them at all - which is why I'm redesigning her.

    http://twaud.io/FR2


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    If you couldn't tell - the belt on her sleeve has frequency bars going up and down.

    I've forgotten to draw this - Should she have two belts on her sleeve plain OR should she have one large one with active frequency bars?

    Opinions? Critiques? Ideas? ;u;


    Last edited by Kiyone on Thu Sep 02, 2010 7:30 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Forgotten to include some information)

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    Re: UTAU Design: Opinions and Critiques wanted!

    Post by moeloid on Thu Sep 02, 2010 7:16 pm

    Wow, she's really pretty! I think this design fits her voice very well^^

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    Re: UTAU Design: Opinions and Critiques wanted!

    Post by Kiyone on Thu Sep 02, 2010 7:39 pm

    Thank you,I'm glad you like it! <3

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    Re: UTAU Design: Opinions and Critiques wanted!

    Post by vio. on Thu Sep 02, 2010 9:37 pm

    She's cute and reminds me of the series Galaxy Angel *A* Keep Keep!!

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    Re: UTAU Design: Opinions and Critiques wanted!

    Post by koolit on Thu Sep 02, 2010 9:43 pm

    Gwuah, she's such a cool looking utau @u@

    Um, I would say that the large-frequency belt thing on her sleeve will make her looking more utau-ish x) I would say use those if you want kind of the more Crypton-y, maybe less original look.
    But maybe if you would rather have her a bit less utau looking, maybe do the 2 plain belts.
    And I'm sorry if I'm not making sense xD I have trouble explaining things sometimes.

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    Re: UTAU Design: Opinions and Critiques wanted!

    Post by Nanashi_Zokune on Thu Sep 02, 2010 10:11 pm

    she sounds so sweet and smooth and there's a calming feeling coming from her voice, i really like her voice~ i think the voice matches her design quite nicely :3

    i kinda lol'd how you're attached to those certain color's cause that's how nanashi probably would have been but i decided to replace gray with green and black~

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    Re: UTAU Design: Opinions and Critiques wanted!

    Post by Kiyone on Thu Sep 02, 2010 11:01 pm

    @vio. Thank you! <3
    Galaxy Angels huh? I've never heard of it. Maybe I'll go check it out later.

    @koolit
    Thank you ~
    No,no,don't worry,I completely understand what you're saying!
    ..I'm still iffy about that actually,still deciding.

    Ah,what do you think about the boots? I'm unsure of the idea of the play,pause,stop and record buttons on the tags on her boots. ;;

    @Nanashi_Zokune
    Haha,well,the colours just stuck to me after over a year.
    Hmm..from reading that,I might test out different colours ~ I'll see. Also thank you very much!


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    Re: UTAU Design: Opinions and Critiques wanted!

    Post by koolit on Fri Sep 03, 2010 6:16 pm

    I like the play/stop/etc. tags on them C: I think they are a little enough detail to pull off the more technologic-look without trying too hard.
    And this is personal preference, but I like the first version of the boots (the one without the belts at the top). But I think the belts at the foot look nice x) I hope that helps.


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    Re: UTAU Design: Opinions and Critiques wanted!

    Post by Kiyone on Fri Sep 03, 2010 6:47 pm

    Mm,that was what I was originally going to go with really. The belts on the boots seemed like over doing it,no?

    It does,thank you! <33

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    Re: UTAU Design: Opinions and Critiques wanted!

    Post by Haji_Kyone on Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:31 am

    Hehe, she is gorgeous, and the voice fits her voice too~ <3

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    Re: UTAU Design: Opinions and Critiques wanted!

    Post by Kiyone on Sat Sep 04, 2010 2:13 pm

    Thank you Haji! ;v;

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