I need some critique on Fuko Zonbi's voice.

Lately I've been recording and rerecording her, and whatever I do, she sounds strange(to me). I would like to know if there is anything I can do better when/if I record her VB again. I am in a situation where I can't get a better microphone, and OREMO is all I'm working with, aside from the new Audacity for pitch changing.

I'll try downloading REAPER, but currently, what do you think I can work on, judging by this sample?

http://www.4shared.com/audio/EZiJ6knP/sample_mari.html

Thank you!

Aw, she sounds very cute! >_<
But I'm kinda a fan of her so my opinion is a bit biassed.

I heard somewhere that OREMO lowers a bit the quality of the samples but I'm not that sure if it had any effect on your VB here.
It's still just a rumour to me as I didn't any experimental test.

If I have to be very picky I would say that the sample of "jo" (or is it "yo"?) in 0:00 lowers drastically the volume and doesn't end perfect. No idea if it's the ust, the sample, the rendering or just myself.

Thanks!! :D