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    Official Art (Icanhazimprovementlolz?)

    Post by Luna on Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:12 pm

    SO GUIZE GUESS WAT.
    I was bored the other day, and I realized how shitty Luna's official art/boxart was, so i redid it. xD
    took like 6 hours, but I redid it.
    Here's the ORIGINAL one:
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    and I was actually proud of that at one point.

    Here's the NEW version:
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    Anything I could fix?
    I could say i've improved in colouring and anatomy, amirite?

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    Re: Official Art (Icanhazimprovementlolz?)

    Post by LupinAKAFlashTH2 on Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:26 pm

    The second one is shinyer and glossier~ XD
    Um, I think each part the arm is just barely lengthier than the side of the working head, correct? Try working on that~
    Let's are just about the length of the arm, not including the hand. XD
    Otherwise, you've done great! :D You've definitely improved in coloring~ It's all so bright and vivid~

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    Re: Official Art (Icanhazimprovementlolz?)

    Post by Luna on Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:31 pm

    I tried to fix her arm xD
    You should have seen the sketch Dx
    it was terrible to work with.

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    Re: Official Art (Icanhazimprovementlolz?)

    Post by KanashiiNoNeko on Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:56 pm

    I think the body is too long...
    Oh and the *cough* chest can be a bit bigger, i think the mouth can be a bit smaller, to give her a slightly shier look to make her cuter... *shot*
    dun accuse me, I am 12 |D

    And this is WAAAAYZ better than what i can do =D

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    Re: Official Art (Icanhazimprovementlolz?)

    Post by Crossfrown on Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:42 am

    KanashiiNoNeko wrote:I think the body is too long...
    Oh and the *cough* chest can be a bit bigger, i think the mouth can be a bit smaller, to give her a slightly shier look to make her cuter... *shot*
    dun accuse me, I am 12 |D

    And this is WAAAAYZ better than what i can do =D

    B-but then she wouldn't be an energetic DFC! :<

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    Re: Official Art (Icanhazimprovementlolz?)

    Post by KanashiiNoNeko on Tue Apr 27, 2010 11:04 am

    Crossfrown wrote:
    KanashiiNoNeko wrote:I think the body is too long...
    Oh and the *cough* chest can be a bit bigger, i think the mouth can be a bit smaller, to give her a slightly shier look to make her cuter... *shot*
    dun accuse me, I am 12 |D

    And this is WAAAAYZ better than what i can do =D

    B-but then she wouldn't be an energetic DFC! :<
    pfff xD

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