Critique my Lynne cover? D:

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    Ezri

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    Critique my Lynne cover? D:

    Post by Ezri on Fri Oct 15, 2010 6:30 pm

    I want to make sure it's as good as it can be before I make a video. ouo;

    http://www.4shared.com/audio/ss01Fc7H/Lynne.html

    I'm aware of her laggy "sha"s and her occasionally early "a"s, so refrain from mentioning those pretty please. :D Other than that, go crazy.
    I use UTAUs other than my own, I really do. D:

    Thanks so much in advance.

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    Re: Critique my Lynne cover? D:

    Post by Haloheroine on Fri Oct 15, 2010 6:50 pm

    Why don't you just edit the oto of the "sha" and "a" if they glitch? XD

    Anyway, past that...
    *waits half an hour for cover to load so she can judge*
    Hm... Overall, a lot of sounds don't sound too much past the consonant, I'd suggest editing the otos.
    Not enough preutt usually causes that (Or not fitting the UTAU to the UST...)

    It's mixed well. c: And some of the slower parts are really smooth.

    I would like to hear some nice improv in it, myself. I think it would make it a bunch more kickass. It's really not that hard to come up with... I mean, even if you copied someone elses (I like to copy Chikurou and Miichans improv, recently... not sure they did a cover of this though)...

    Also... The scream. Work, it could use. xDD Uh.. But screams are hard to explain... so... I'll only explain if you want to make it sound more... scream-y. ^^ It's fine as it is, it just isn't very impactful.

    Anyway, it's presentable as it is, in the end. c: Only pay attention to any of this if something particularly matters to you.

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    Re: Critique my Lynne cover? D:

    Post by Ezri on Fri Oct 15, 2010 10:37 pm

    I've been tweaking the oto's, but I hadn't gotten it quite right yet and I didn't want to re-render the whole thing until I knew what else I should fix so I could do it all at once. XD

    But thanks so much for your help. :'D That scream was bugging me, too. Just wanted to know if it was just me.xD

    I'll work on it and update later, perhaps.


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