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    Shou's new design?

    Post by 산쇼씨 (Sansyo-ssi) on Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:39 pm

    Spoiler:

    What do you guys think?
    Is it an improvement over his old design?
    I'd really like critique on this, please~ ;u;/

    EDIT:
    Also, does his design match his voice type alright? *^*;;
    http://www.4shared.com/audio/Ouo5uatb/Breeze.html



    I'm giving Shou a makeover, because I really don't like the decisions I made on his character when I first started off with UTAU. ;;;; OTZ
    So, I'm giving him a different outfit. (This one looks more like a highschool uniform, because this year, he would've graduated to highschool in Korea *v*)
    Also, I'm changing the Hanja for his name to be more Vocaloid/UTAU like. (I split 'Kane' into 'Ka' and 'Ne'; 'Song' and 'Sound')


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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by 어리싸 라커씨(EorissaRakeo-ssi) on Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:42 pm

    I like it its really cute!!!

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Haloheroine on Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:46 pm

    Ah, Shou~ He's really cool-looking XD

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Chasing Fireflies on Mon Apr 12, 2010 8:53 pm

    Kyaaa~! I love it, he looks so cool! I just want to squish him! <3

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Misha on Mon Apr 12, 2010 9:24 pm

    The top area seems nicer, but I would prefer the pants to be a tad shorter.

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by 산쇼씨 (Sansyo-ssi) on Mon Apr 12, 2010 11:47 pm

    Aho~ @u@/
    Thanks, guyss. .u.

    And his knee-high shorts is one of the things I didn't like about his old outfit. orz;;
    He looked shota-ish, and my voice is definitely shota, aha; (High, but not young/shota? ahahaaa;;; )


    So I added a voice sample in the first post--
    ..I wanna know if the design fits the voice alright, @v@;;

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Haloheroine on Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:06 am

    <3
    His voice is wonderful, and really suits him...
    The song doesnt suit his pose though XD

    ...May I ask what that song is called?
    :'C Its really nice.

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by 산쇼씨 (Sansyo-ssi) on Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:12 am

    Ahaha thankss~
    ...and inorite- :C
    I seriously suck at poses;;; orz


    Oh, and it's Breeze by 19's Sound Factory. .u.
    You can get the VSQ from their website-

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Haloheroine on Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:15 am

    Poses are difficult D;

    Aaaaand thank you.
    *runs off to 19 sound factory's website*

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Crossfrown on Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:18 am

    It's...uh...kinda really generic ;;;

    I wouldn't be able to identify him on site, tbh.

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by 산쇼씨 (Sansyo-ssi) on Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:28 am

    ahahaha, I would've linked you Halo, but I don't have the website bookmarked ahaa;



    Nnnn-;;
    I kinda noticed too, the generic..ness?
    I wanted him to look Crypton-esque, I guess? ;u;

    I can't really think of anything to make him unique without making the design too far off from the voice, though. orz

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Misha on Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:36 am

    nnnn
    maybe the pants could go In at the end so it's baggy at the top yet tighter at the bottom?
    beacuse in the end I think it's the ... openess that seems strange to me.

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by 산쇼씨 (Sansyo-ssi) on Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:48 am

    Oh! That sounds like a good idea-
    I think that would look better too, aha. .u.\

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Mooncrafter on Tue Apr 13, 2010 12:54 am

    I love both his design and his voice! Absolutely awesome!

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Crossfrown on Tue Apr 13, 2010 7:08 pm

    I don't really like Kei's outfits, because they're extremely unimpressive and drab. It's the character design that's built for the outfit that makes it look so nice.

    Kei-style-outfit =/= quality. (almost always the exact opposite)
    Kei-style-design = quality.

    It's something to be really careful of.

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by 산쇼씨 (Sansyo-ssi) on Fri Apr 16, 2010 12:21 am

    Spoiler:

    I tried being a little more creative with the outfit this time. *u*/;;;


    Also, which do you guys prefer?
    This more cartoony style, or the style in the first picture?

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Haloheroine on Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:04 am

    Well... Me being a (far lamer OTL) artist myself, I have to say, I don't really mind which style he's in; as long as you're comfortable drawing in it and you think his look fits the way you want people to see him.

    I do think the slightly older looking him suits the voice a bit more though Neutral
    Because he really looks shota in this style.

    ...Not that that's a bad thing; just might not be the look you're going for XD


    On his outfit... The pants are a little boring compared to the rest of his outfit.
    ...And the piano keys on his jacket seem a little lonely. :'C Maybe add some somewhere else to make it more balanced, so it doesn't look like you slapped them there just because he's an UTAU.
    ......

    ..........
    Not sure how you could make this work, but maybe fit some on his pants or shoes somehow? OTL Maybe that's a stupid idea... I can't tell... *babbles incoherently because she's tired*

    But generally <3
    I love Shou a lot. ; u; He looks wonderful (and his voice is so nice T wT)

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Crossfrown on Fri Apr 16, 2010 5:50 am

    amdfaklfnmaklfn it's so cute oh my god aaahhhhhh

    Watch out for red and white color scheme! I just realized that was why I immediately went 8| at the first one.

    The style looks better in the first, too.

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Aisu on Fri Apr 16, 2010 7:45 am

    ^THIS.

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by 산쇼씨 (Sansyo-ssi) on Wed Apr 21, 2010 6:01 pm

    Spoiler:

    yeogi--
    I went for a little in between, I think he looks more cartoony-er in this compared to the first, but not as young as he did in the one before. *v*;

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by LupinAKAFlashTH2 on Wed Apr 21, 2010 6:12 pm

    i'mgoingtostealthatpose

    That is some pretty epic Shou right there. He looks so cool~!
    dfidoapjsiopfp Show me how you color it's so epic.
    (You know, I kinda miss Shinbi. Maybe you should remake him, but keep Shou at the same time)

    BUT SERIOUSLY HIS HAIR IS WIN. :D

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Chasing Fireflies on Wed Apr 21, 2010 6:15 pm

    I love the bass clef on his tie~

    He looks so cute! ^__^

    fffff sorry, I don't know anything about art orz

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by Haloheroine on Wed Apr 21, 2010 6:34 pm

    He looks both shota and badass. Just like before. I think this one is perfect ^^
    .....
    ..........
    Also. May I has ur drawing skillz plz? ; A;/

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    Re: Shou's new design?

    Post by 산쇼씨 (Sansyo-ssi) on Thu Apr 22, 2010 12:44 am

    Fsst fsst-
    My coloring is so simple lol-- *Flatcolorsftl* orz
    And maybe if I find a good voicer (whohasntalreadyvoicedavoicebankkkHNNNG) I'll try to use SHINBI again. C:

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    Re: Shou's new design?

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    dfjlkasfjajfanj OMFG HE'S SO EPIC.

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    His hair reminds me of Megaman.exe/Hub from the Megaman Battle Network games... I love those games <3333

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