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    Man Up. [Apollo x Tansei]

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    Post by vio. Thu May 27, 2010 1:04 am

    Umm, So I got bored and started on an Apollo x Tansei crack. I don't even LIKE Yaoi, but I'm writing this because It's going to be so freaking entertaining. Um, it's not going to be a oneshot, because I like long, expansive stories... But I'll be sure to update regularly :D!!!

    Please give me feedback and crits QAQ;;
    ** also luna if you don't want this (since apollo is your's) lemme know and I'll stop D: **

    Chapter One:
    Spoiler:

    Chapter Two:
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    Chapter Three:
    Spoiler:

    Chapter Four:
    Spoiler:

    Chapter Five:
    Spoiler:

    Chapter Six:
    Spoiler:

    Chapter Seven:
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    Chapter Eight:
    Spoiler:

    Continues In Next Post, Because This Message is TOO BIAGH :'<


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    Post by vio. Fri May 28, 2010 3:34 am

    Chapter Nine:
    Spoiler:

    Chapter Ten;
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    //fin


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    Post by smeen Fri May 28, 2010 4:28 am

    If you are not used to malexmale fics, you are doing it quite right! *nods*
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    Post by Misha Fri May 28, 2010 4:40 am

    ffffffffffffffffff

    Keep goinggggggg : D
    I had fun reading these ~

    They haaaaaaave to go to a club or something.
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    Post by vio. Fri May 28, 2010 5:10 pm

    New Chapuuutah.
    ;w;

    Thank you gaiz :D It means alot and keeps me goinn!!

    @misha, maybe later ;D
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    Post by Chasing Fireflies Fri May 28, 2010 11:55 pm

    l;fjdsEEEEEEE

    Please continue ;w; Apollo is so adorable and I really like how you characterized Tansei.
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    Post by vio. Mon May 31, 2010 5:02 am

    ;u; thanks you guys, I'm confidant in this now! ahah.

    AND NOW CHAPTER FIIIIVE
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    Post by vio. Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:26 am

    After a long wait, Chapter six is up.. I think it's kind of short, but neh. xD Too late for me to write more, I was supposed to be asleep like 2 hours ago.
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    Post by Misha Wed Jun 09, 2010 3:22 am

    C -Can I request that Ichiro be in the next chapter? Even if for like a second > w<
    If you need a better idea of a personality I can give one to you xD

    This is awesome by the way, keep going!
    You're very good at writing : D
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    Post by vio. Wed Jun 09, 2010 12:29 pm

    I was going to put Ichiro in it to be honest xDD MISHA MIND READER. I know he's very chivalrous, and nicer in how he handles women than Tansei, but should you give me any extra tidbits? c:

    And thank you :D That means alot. I need to put this on dA xD
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    Post by Chasing Fireflies Wed Jun 09, 2010 3:59 pm

    ;lgfjds eeee yay <333

    I'm really excited to find out what happens at the club now~ ^__^ Keep it up!
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    Post by vio. Thu Jun 10, 2010 4:34 am

    And now a kind of shortish chapter in the club =u=

    Oh, Ichiro. xD

    I was gonna go more indepth with the scene in the alley, but then I was like "D: BUT THAT MAY BE TOO MUCH"
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    Post by Aline Thu Jun 10, 2010 5:23 am

    I got involved in the story. Poor Apollo, doesn't know the mess he's getting into... XD

    I wonder if the "suspicious" guy Hachi was flirting with was Deon, though XD
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    Post by Misha Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:08 pm

    NO LIKE SRS I READ THIS CHAPTER 3209587985340 TIMES.
    ; u;;; thank you so much for including them.

    And you got him perfectly don't worry, and if you need anything else, uh, he give lots of fake smiles, he's not good with showing 'true' emotions yet will always act nicely, and he has lots of underground connections, despite not being in a color gang anymore * u* He's a nice guy but he himself doesnt really know it, he just sees himself as boring... if that made sense xD
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    Post by vio. Mon Jun 14, 2010 4:09 am

    Ha @ Aline. Probably C:

    And Misha :D No problem. They fit in there so it was fine. And I'm glad I got ichiro right C:

    And new chapter. :< And sorry some of the writing near the end fails.. Kind of dieing of tiredom right now but I wanted this chapter done. xD
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    Post by vio. Fri Jun 18, 2010 5:22 am

    vio. wrote:Ha @ Aline. Probably C:

    And Misha :D No problem. They fit in there so it was fine. And I'm glad I got ichiro right C:

    And new chapter. :< And sorry some of the writing near the end fails.. Kind of dieing of tiredom right now but I wanted this chapter done. xD

    & Updated with a Sweet Short Installment~~
    You have to check Second Post now. Because my Story is too long :C xD
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    Post by vio. Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:32 am

    THIS CHAPTER!
    AND I'M DONE WITH THIS STORY.

    /chapter ten [final] in second post

    UUUBER Rushed ending is uberly rushed but like, I have accomplished what I wanted with this and new interests have happened so like =u=.. I didn't know what else I could do with it so it's done haaaappy ending YAY DESU.

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