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    Sanloids - Is my translation right ?

    MillyAqualine
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    Post by MillyAqualine Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:44 pm

    I finished a translation about one song ("San Loids" which presents eponym band)

    I think it would be better...I tried to translate full song in Japanese (when I couldn't translate, I was using jisho and Harrap's Japanese dictionary)...

    Do you think I'm wrong ?

    French original version:
    Spoiler:

    Here English version but I may mistranslated English lyrics too (Shame on me...) T__T Sorry, there are no rhyms...

    Spoiler:

    Here my translation...
    Spoiler:

    I'm worried...


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    * = Old French expression who means "no". Now, is used to make fun

    ** = I imagined a chibi girl behind Sakura Cerise who writes "NO" on a notice x'DD
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    Post by Mikaheru-kun Fri Jul 09, 2010 5:05 pm

    I like it ^^ You are not wrong, according to my Japanese/French French/Japanese dictionary, there are practically no mistakes ^^
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    Post by MillyAqualine Fri Jul 09, 2010 5:06 pm

    Ok ^^

    It was very hard x')
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    Post by Mikaheru-kun Fri Jul 09, 2010 5:09 pm

    Yeah , i'm sure it was ! But seriously, you've made a really good job ^^
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    Post by MillyAqualine Fri Jul 09, 2010 5:10 pm

    Thanks a lot ^^
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    Post by Darkkira1332 Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:27 am

    since I'm a person who can't read japanese....well you did a great job!!! ^_^. I can't wait to hear it.
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    Post by Haloheroine Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:41 am

    Derp, one thing... Translating word by word /=/ Grammar and correct speaking style (casual, formal, rude, etc).

    D; For all I know by reading what I can of that, it seems fine. But you might want to find someone who knows more Japanese and ask them ^^''

    Oh, and why don't you just record french voice banks for them, and make them sing that way? . 3.''
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    Post by MillyAqualine Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:43 am

    Thanks a lot Kira n_n

    Yeah, and when I could, and found music and made pictures, I'll make it TwT It's their presentation, so I can't drop it..I hope I'll have time for it despite of lycée...


    Halo = Oops ._."

    Yeah, I thought to make they sing it in French, but I don't know if English Speakers could understand it x_x"
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    Post by Haloheroine Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:49 am

    MillyAqualine wrote:
    Halo = Oops ._."

    Yeah, I thought to make they sing it in French, but I don't know if English Speakers could understand it x_x"

    Oh, deary. XDD

    Do you think we can understand Japanese, either? Yet we cover songs in the language daily.

    And Yesi-chan makes her originals in Spanish half the time. :C You'd be fine to make it in French.
    <3 Just add English lyrics to the video or description, and it'd be completely fine!
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    Post by MillyAqualine Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:52 am

    Oki doki ^^

    Now, I must found notes for music (and know what instrument I use)
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    Post by Darkkira1332 Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:00 am

    No problem. Anyway I agree with Halo.
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    Post by MillyAqualine Wed Sep 01, 2010 3:09 pm

    Sorry for the inconveniance (and now Utau works, I can make test and begins some tests before to create the song)


    Did a song (Vocaloid, Utauloid, human singer....) ever told about a girl who is obliged to sing very well into the order to save her sweetheart from an evil entity who want kill him ? '_'
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    Post by Darkkira1332 Wed Sep 01, 2010 11:34 pm

    MillyAqualine wrote:Sorry for the inconveniance (and now Utau works, I can make test and begins some tests before to create the song)


    Did a song (Vocaloid, Utauloid, human singer....) ever told about a girl who is obliged to sing very well into the order to save her sweetheart from an evil entity who want kill him ? '_'


    ....that sounds familiar....

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