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    Can someone please check these lyrics?

    Chasing Fireflies
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    Post by Chasing Fireflies Sun Oct 03, 2010 12:07 pm

    Sorry for all the "original song" spam, but I attempted some Japanese lyrics and I'd like to make sure they at least... kind of make sense before I make the UST for the vocal part. owo;; So I would be ETERNALLY grateful if someone who is better at Japanese than I am could check these over for mistakes, etc. S-Sorry, I hope they're not totally lame... I'm really not that good at writing lyrics, orz

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    Here's the music, if you want to listen. Again, thank you SO SO much to anyone who can help. ;w;
    Mayuen
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    Post by Mayuen Sun Oct 03, 2010 1:44 pm

    It doesn't sound lame, it sounds really cool~
    But I suck at japanese so I can't help you with that :c
    Ezri
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    Post by Ezri Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:17 pm

    I'm a bit of a semi-beginner at Japanese, but from the quick look I took at it I think it's mostly correct. ; w ; Although, for the meaning you want, I think "kurai" would be more accurate than "fukai" for "dark"... >w> "Fukai" means "profound", not "dark".

    I might look into some stuff a little more, but I think most of it is fine. OTL

    I LOVE the music and lyrics, though. <3

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