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    Post by Kunazami on Sun Apr 11, 2010 2:25 pm

    I'm hoping this in the right place. >.< If not, then i'm sorry. D:

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    Yeah, i've drawn a reference to my Utau Sakebune Mio. However, i not sure if i should use it, or just keep improving my art until it improves. :/

    I'm going back school tomorrow, so i can practise then; but in the meantime, this is the best i can do. D:

    I was going to request an image, but i feel bad asking. DX So i attempted on my own.

    Please, tell me what you think. ^^;
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    Post by Crossfrown on Sun Apr 11, 2010 3:00 pm

    The design itself is nice.

    Concerning art, her arms are kind of randomly placed sticks. They should be way thicker (their size is making the rest of the body look huge and clunky overall) and actually connected to about the middle of where the breast is.

    They get skeletal around the elbows. D:
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    Post by Kunazami on Mon Apr 12, 2010 11:26 am

    Crossfrown wrote:The design itself is nice.

    Concerning art, her arms are kind of randomly placed sticks. They should be way thicker (their size is making the rest of the body look huge and clunky overall) and actually connected to about the middle of where the breast is.

    They get skeletal around the elbows. D:

    Ah i see. Now that you mention it, they do look very odd. XD

    Thank you Crossfrown. ^__^ I'm now going to practice on arms, and when i've improved, i can edit those ones. ^^

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