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Two Song Ideas--Need Lyrics and Music! :D (Free Rant Included!)

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Two Song Ideas--Need Lyrics and Music! :D (Free Rant Included!)

Post by fukokun on Wed Sep 01, 2010 9:02 am

I've been having trouble writing for a while-- my creative class (used to be called Narrative) is now Global Issues. I came in thinking it was going to be creative-- I was wrong. We have to do a RESEARCH PROJECT. For a foundation of our choice. (Not that supporting foundations was a bad thing, just not what I wanted to do.) I dislike my teacher's teaching skills and have hardly been able to get inspiration.

But now, a ray of hope has shown through the heavens! Two song ideas!

1: Possibly called "The Hurting Cup". It's about a girl who gets beat up and bullied at school. She hates getting hurt and tries to stand up for herself. Everyday, she goes home and puts a drop of blood in a cup. She tells herself, when that cup is full, I won't have to be hurt anymore(she'll kill the bullies).

2. Possibly called "Heck's Gondola". It's about a girl with mirrors for eyes. She sails a gondola out into the sea and carries souls that have done wrong to Heck. (It's not heck, you know that, right? It's the other word. I just censored it. ;A;) When someone looks into her eyes, they see their fate/future, and when they are going to get taken away, they see nothing in her eyes.

Those are some ideas I got. ^^ Feel free to help me, if you want! :D

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Re: Two Song Ideas--Need Lyrics and Music! :D (Free Rant Included!)

Post by Alittleedgex on Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:44 pm

Oooh I would love to give it a try!

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Post by fukokun on Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:10 am

Okay!! Thanks!

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Re: Two Song Ideas--Need Lyrics and Music! :D (Free Rant Included!)

Post by Angel Kiss Hikari on Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:58 pm

Do you need English or Japanese lyrics?
Because if you need English lyrics, I would love to work on them.

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Post by fukokun on Sun Sep 05, 2010 4:04 pm

Either--I'm probably going to have English lyrics, then translate them into Japanese. :D

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Post by Alittleedgex on Sun Sep 05, 2010 10:05 pm

Is there a max on how long the songs can be? Or how small?

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Post by fukokun on Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:33 pm

Nope! :D There's no limit!

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Post by Alittleedgex on Tue Sep 07, 2010 11:12 pm

Alright here is my try at Heck's Gondola, I actually did two versions of this one of the girl's view, and this one. I will post the girl's view when I finish it up. o3o

Spoiler:

When she comes
the faint sound of the beating dumbs
calling for you

Here she comes

Her eyes of the deepest fires
wore these really your aspires
take this last chance to take it back
before she comes back with eyes of black

Here she comes

Going to drag you under
the only time you ever wonder
why you didn't make that turn
why didn't you just learn

Here she comes

Eyes of the blackest coal
here for your darker soul
Pulling you into the sea
as you let out your last plea

Here she is

Was this really your plan
was it worth feeling like a man
as you fall deeper to the flame
victum to your own pathetic game


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Post by fukokun on Wed Sep 08, 2010 8:09 am

Okay! I'll be waiting! The first was really good! :D Might I make a few changes, if that's okay with you? ^^

Aspires to desires
beating dumbs- beating drums
victum to your own pathetic game- victim to your pathetic game?

Thanks a lot, I like it!! :D

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Post by Hecate on Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:07 am

I would try on the first song.:3

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Post by smeen on Wed Sep 08, 2010 11:58 am

I'm still trying to write something for your first idea...

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Re: Two Song Ideas--Need Lyrics and Music! :D (Free Rant Included!)

Post by Hecate on Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:05 pm

Oops >_< never mind then!
Sorry smeen.

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Re: Two Song Ideas--Need Lyrics and Music! :D (Free Rant Included!)

Post by fukokun on Wed Sep 08, 2010 5:38 pm

@#!*% wrote:Oops >_< never mind then!
Sorry smeen.

No, please go ahead! :D I'm willing to hear everyone's ideas! ^^
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