WIP- Original... Demo song..?

http://www.4shared.com/audio/vsgmgWX7/CutesyDemo.html

Didn't take me very long to make... Just thought I'd share.

Please say something if you want this to be longer, but if you don't care, it'll be left this long and just have the BGM tweaked and lyrics/Vocals added.
I personally think it's make a cute demo song.

The piano is where the vocals would be.

There are two other tracks under the main bell BGM track, but you can hardly hear them XD

I like it! :D It sounds sweet and I would like to hear more of it!
Seriously, I wish I could do stuff like that. ;w;

That's awesome...

Oh, it's so adorable! Reminds me of Platinum Romance and the like. And the other subtle tracks add something to it, I think. It's neat. : D

I love the effect that the bells give~ There were a couple notes of the bells that clashed, though. I can't specifically point them out =v=

I can't wait to hear it with some vocals~ I presume Hayao will be singing this, no?

@Fukokun
<3 Thank you! . u.
T uT It's really not that hard, if you get the basics in music theory...

@Smeen
Thanks c:

@Ezri
. u. I'm glad you think it's neat. <333
Adorable is exactly what I was going for (Really glad noone has said creepy or anything, honestly XD)

@Moeloid
= u= Yeah, I noticed the weird bell thing. That's one of the things I'll change... Once I find were I stuffed up XD

<3 I was actually thinking of making someone cuter sing it, but if I have no-one I need to test (I'm hoping this can be Derbyloids demo), It'll end up as Hayaoi...

Haloheroine wrote:(Really glad noone has said creepy or anything, honestly XD)

Well, now you mention it..
XD jk. It's really cute~ The background tune is nice and upbeat. Are the vocals on a different melody?

If it's just for a short demo, it's fine and cute at the length it is. I think it'd make a nice song introduction though, if you wanted to lengthen it ^^