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    Post by smeen on Tue Jun 08, 2010 1:21 pm

    Excactly what the title says. I recently wrote down a lot of my original stories that are too fanbased to actually use for something (this something is called a novel, but that has nothing to do with this) and I was wondering if I could make songs out of them.

    I have never composed anything in my life though, but I started anyway. Maybe someone can use the lyrics (when they're done) for something... I dunno. I just wanted to share.

    So, my first story was about two boys. One enslaved the other but (Wait for it...) they fall in love. (Geez, seriously? xD) Very stupid explaination, but it has quite the backstory.
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    The main story is about two boys who fall in love under extreme circumstances. One of them is the son of the dictator, the other one is one of the main figures in the resistance. The resistance-boy gets caught and enslaved by the dictator-boy, but after his slave performs a strange ritual when he loses control the dictator-boy slowly starts to see the world through the eyes of his slave and they grow closer. But the butler of dictator-boy knows about the ritual and reports this to the dictator himself. Of course, the ending is sad. But that's just me and my way of telling stories.

    This thing is inspired by a lot of things, but the main thing was the Daughter of Evil-series.

    So, I will update this when I have done anything. Enjoy reading this... random post.


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    Post by Fumfum on Tue Jun 08, 2010 1:47 pm

    yesh, you should~ ,that's a nice story~ O:
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    Post by smeen on Tue Jun 08, 2010 1:51 pm

    Thank you!
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    Post by suthethird on Tue Jun 08, 2010 2:04 pm

    *is even more tempted to make Anaka sing Servant of Evil for LOKE*
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    Post by smeen on Tue Jun 08, 2010 2:08 pm

    You should! I like Servant of Evil. Serious one of my favourite songs.
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    Post by Chasing Fireflies on Tue Jun 08, 2010 3:34 pm

    Ooh, that's a good story idea! Good luck writing the lyrics, I'd love to see them when you're done! ^__^

    For composing, sometimes it helps to start with one thing (like chords or a bass line) and build off that.
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    Post by Wolkabai on Tue Jun 08, 2010 7:20 pm

    ; D ha reminds me of a manga I read once..

    I think it was shota -ded-

    You should write it : D
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    Post by smeen on Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:01 am

    @Chase, thank you! I am writing the lyrics of the first song now, but I am very perfectionistic so I don't think they are done soon. xD And thanks for the tip on composing. I guess it will work out. Smile

    @Wolkabai, I will. Smile And that could be right... I have read lots of them so... yeah...
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    Post by smeen on Thu Jul 15, 2010 9:24 am

    DOUBLE POSTU!

    I am done with the lyrics of the three songs that will cover this story acr. I bet you guys forgot completely of it, ne? xD Don't worry, I did too untill suddenly... BAM! I wrote three songs in two days. I should get a life.

    The songs are named 'The Day', 'The Evening' and 'The Morning After' and cover the story from the slave's, the dictator boy's and the butler's point of view.

    Mikau is going to help translating the lyrics... (THANK YOO!) And I already know that 'The Evening' will be sung by Aido Feirune and 'The Morning After' by Vista. For 'The Day' I have no voice yet, but I will not let you advertise your UTAU here. I'm sorry guys, but I have some kind of idea, just not a complete one yet.

    Anyway, Imma posting these lyrics. I need some ideas on the melody of some sorsts... So if anyone's interested...

    The Day
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    One fatefull encounter
    I tried to hide so well
    You found me and you fought me
    And took me away from home

    I was captured
    I was bound
    I was chained
    Since that day

    Against all my expectations
    You healed my wounds and pride
    Altough I was your personal slave
    You gave me your love and care

    I was captured
    By your soul
    It shone so bright
    Since that day

    Despite all that they told me
    My instincts didn't want to run
    You took care of me and loved me
    I needed to give something too

    I was captured
    But never enslaved
    I was your friend
    Since that day

    We were together but I wanted more
    I kinda forced you in our bond
    I just wanted you to stay close
    It was never meant to end so soon
    But when they found out it was too late
    We were already as close as can be
    Please don't be mad, don't be sad
    It was never meant to be this way
    And I did it all for you

    I was captured
    Body, heart, soul
    They belong to you
    Ever since

    And I did it all for you

    The Evening
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    In my family
    It's a tradition
    That every member
    Should have a slave

    On that evening
    I found you
    You were my choice
    I took you home

    I was never sure of the idea
    Untill my eyes saw you
    I wanted to own you
    My heart screamed it with all it's might

    So I captured you and took you home
    Much to my parent's delight

    On that evening
    I found you
    You were my choice
    I nursed your wounds

    It was not like you were my slave
    But you certainly were mine
    I never forced you to stay
    But you never left my side

    We were getting close after all
    I wondered what would happen now

    On that evening
    I found you
    You were my choice
    We got real close

    I wanted you in every way
    We got too close, too soon, too fast
    But we never backed down
    We kept going on and on and on...

    I should've known we were watched
    This was never going to work

    We were chased
    We were betrayed
    I thought we would die
    I thought we would die

    On that evening
    I found you
    I was your choice
    I held you close

    We were together for such a short time
    But please know I don't regret it

    On that evening
    I lost you
    But don't be afraid
    We'll meet again

    In my family
    It's a tradition
    That every member
    Should have a slave

    The Morning After
    Spoiler:
    He never talks
    We don't talk to him
    He dishgraced us

    I only did my duty
    I had to observe and report
    They were suspected anyway
    It was only a matter of time

    I saw them that night
    Together they were, so close
    Making his slave his lover
    I sicovered that one secret

    I reported this one matter
    Actions were soon to follow
    They both were in grave danger
    Their lives nothing worth anymore

    I obeyed my master
    Chased them as they ran
    I was faster
    They knew their chances

    It was my task to kill them
    I raised the gun and pulled the trigger
    Red blood poured out of him
    There was still one left

    He never talks
    We don't talk to him
    He disgraced us
    I couldn't kill him

    If you still are reading, Yuugi will now give you a virtual cookie.
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    Post by Kolya-kun on Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:02 am

    I can't wait to hear it when it's finished~
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    Post by Yume Barauta on Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:22 pm

    I love it~! ((And I did read all the lyrics.))
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    Post by smeen on Fri Jul 16, 2010 5:20 am

    Thank you both! I'll work on it... ^-^'

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