"The Snow White Princess Is..." [English WIP!]

I've been a member for.. six months, and this is my first post OTL.

I shall be making attempts to be active from now on! (But I'll probably just end up lurking hrrrng)

Anyway 8D.

My WIP English UTAU has a small demo song!

Linklinklinkdesu.

Lyrics under the spoiler ('Cause she's pretty hard to understand.. xD;)

Spoiler:

Oh, and this is her appearance:
Linked because I'm too lazy to embed the image in this post 8C

Her voice is so cute! 8D

I can't wait to see what she's like when she's done

She's really cute~ I can't understand her without the lyrics, but with them she's really clear XP So I think it's probably the way you recorded her makes her lyrics sound kinda muffled and hard to understand.

I love that song! XD And your UTAU is so cute! I would have had no idea what she was saying if you hadn't put those lyrics up, though. ^^;

Even with lyrics I had small amounts of trouble finding where she changes syllables OTL
She has potential, but either the way you recorded her or how she was Oto'd messed up some of her transitions that need to be harsher.

Without the lyrics (when she first started), "Mirror, mirror, mirror, mirror" on the wall just sounded like "shiwia wia wia wia on the wall" D:
There's some other things too, but the one of the thinks that stops me from understanding her is the... lack of diphthongs. Ai, is the most obvious one. D: In "kind" she just says "kid" instead on "kaind".
Or something like that, maybe you just formed some words incorrectly IDK *has done that before*

Her voice is cute, pretty sure the overthetop vibrato is the UST itself, and she herself is ADORABLE. <3333 lovelove

Oh! And welcome to the forums, Ms.Lurker XD

Thanks everyone 8D

I think it's a combo of bad recording + little english utau experience + overall failure = not too great clarity xD

Without the lyrics (when she first started), "Mirror, mirror, mirror, mirror" on the wall just sounded like "shiwia wia wia wia on the wall" D:

Actually, I got really confused on what sort of pronunciation I should use for "mirror" orz.

Like, should it be, "mee-rah" or "mi-rah" or "mer-rah" or "mee-ror" etc..

At least I succeeded in the area of cuteness, though P: Don't you think you can forgive bad english when it's adorable? xDD

raeka wrote:At least I succeeded in the area of cuteness, though P: Don't you think you can forgive bad english when it's adorable? xDD

Never! *listens again* Aw, okay, maybe. XD

If you don't have much experience with making English USTs, maybe it would be easier to start with a slower song? And 'mirror' I pronnounce 'mih-rah', but it depends on the accent how you say it.

xMienaiTsubasa wrote:If you don't have much experience with making English USTs, maybe it would be easier to start with a slower song? And 'mirror' I pronnounce 'mih-rah', but it depends on the accent how you say it.

Thanks! xD I might try something calming like Saihate or Dear.

Yet I did try and make her sing Palette not too long ago. I won't post lyrics, I wanna see what you think she's saying P:

Click meee.

I think I need to make her "t"'s a bit quieter or remove altogether. They stick out so much! > <

Spoiler:

Beautiful. Deep lyrics, yes.
Sorry, I can't really understand her at all.

Even WITH the video with lyrics next to me. I have no idea how you got the English in it. Especially the last line, where the "palette"? D|

IDK, she has promise... just a little iffy.

Haloheroine wrote:Beautiful. Deep lyrics, yes.
Sorry, I can't really understand her at all.

Even WITH the video with lyrics next to me. I have no idea how you got the English in it. Especially the last line, where the "palette"? D|

IDK, she has promise... just a little iffy.

I lol'd. Amazing lyrics xD

The "palette"'s there, I just stuff around with word order a bit :U

I'm now trying to fix the UST/voice samples as we speak!

Spoiler:

I can understand some of it.. I think, after listening a few times. Maybe you need to work on the way you're putting it together in the UST a little better as well XD