Zessei Bijin UST Help

I was wondering if someone wouldn't mind looking over my ZESSEI BIJIN UST. It's the first ending to Sayonara Zetsubou Sensei, and it's my first UST. Of course, it's pretty horrible, but I'm pretty sure it's pitched right. So, um, would someone look it over and make corrections where they think needed?
The UST is really bare and basic, but I'm rather lost on what else to do....

LYRICS + ORIGINALSONG

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fffff did you read my mind, I was just about to make this UST! XD

And it's definitely not horrible! It's on time and mostly on pitch (there were a couple things I fixed, and I'm not really sure what the "r"s in the middle are supposed to be). It looks there's vibrato on almost every note, which I don't think is really necessary (unless it's just your style) and it would sound soooo amazing with pitch bends. ^__^ Also, it makes it a little smoother if you make the short little unaccented notes a quieter. Let me know if you need help with anything (especially pitch bends, I love doing those~ XD)

I made a couple small changes, if you want to look at it~

Those 'r' were supposed to be the Rests xD I just didn't capitalize them. They used to be notes from the midi. UGGGG THAT MIDI WAS A BITCHHHH.

The vibrato was done by UTAU xD. I would have never figured it out, so I cheated by autoing it.

PLEASE DO WHATEVER YOU THINK IS NEEDED!
I really want this to sound nice, so I would love any help on this. I'm making this a four way song, and to show my gratitude, may I use Kazuko :3
I needed the fourth UTAUloid xD

Ohh, I see! Midis can be so obnoxious, sometimes it's easier to just start from scratch. x__x

Oh, and if you only want to put vibrato on certain notes, just right-click each one, go to "Pitch", and check the second box. Then you can drag it around to your heart's content~

Yay, of course! ^__^ I'll finish it up ASAP.