Attempt at KEI style...

No one seems to reply to my requests, so I thought I'd give it a try... ^^;
It's not done with shading ect yet, but I think it's alright?

It's good! However, KEI style has more straight, continuous lines while your lines are rather sketchy. That's the only thing I'd suggest, that you make your lines a bit smoother and less sketchy. ^^

Thanks! Yeah, I'm kind of terrible with that... I fixed it up a bit, but not much. This is harder than I thought! xD