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    Critique wanted on covers!

    moeloid
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    Post by moeloid Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:48 pm

    I have many covers sung by my UTAU, Phoenix, that have not been put into videos as of yet. For now, I just want comments and critique on each of them^^

    And don't be afraid to tear me apart. I'll just cry in private ;w;

    Coward Mont Blanc (PV in progress...) -
    http://www.4shared.com/audio/vmTN8EcQ/Coward_Mont_Blanc_Phoenix.html

    *Hello Planet (I know this is unripe doo-doo covered banana =v=) -
    http://www.4shared.com/audio/zvD1-6LQ/Hello_Planet_Phoenix.html

    Okiagarenai Yo -
    http://www.4shared.com/audio/RzF6Fl3Y/Okiagarenai_yo.html

    Stardust Utopia -
    http://www.4shared.com/audio/5H2-rryp/Stardust_Utopia_Phoenix.html

    Tautology -
    http://www.4shared.com/audio/WCzTa6dB/Tautology.html

    Tsugai Kogarashi (selfcest FTW!) -
    http://www.4shared.com/audio/VYuo1iCi/Tsugai_Kogarashi_SELFCEST.html

    UkeUke! for teh lulz -
    http://www.4shared.com/audio/PONniFyT/UkeUke_-SHORT-_.html

    Utopian -
    http://www.4shared.com/audio/GomkSglM/Utopian_Phoenix.html


    Σ(゜д゜; ) I forgot how many unused covers I have.......
    moeloid
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    Post by moeloid Wed Jul 21, 2010 4:00 pm

    *BUMPITY BUMP BUMP*

    I don't mean to whine and be a pest, but I really would like some thorough critique....it would really help me ;A;
    Chasing Fireflies
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    Post by Chasing Fireflies Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:03 pm

    Oh, that's perfectly okay! ;w; I'm really surprised no one has posted here yet... Alright, let's see...

    @Coward Montblanc
    Very nice! The lower key works well for his voice, he sounds more rockish. owo The only issues I noticed were with the effects on the prechorus ("wasurete shimaeba..."), I see what you were going for but it sounds a bit like he's singing into a fan. XD For the radio effect you'll want to use an FFT filter or a bandpass filter. If you use REAPER, I've gotten a really good radio effect with ReaFir, here's a picture of how it was set up...
    Spoiler:
    And the part at the very end with the sound on two different sides was really cool! I'd turn the vocals up a little bit there, but other than that, it's a great cover. ^__^ And yay, a PV!

    @Hello, Planet
    No it's not unripe doo-doo covered banana ;__; It's very cute! Just the same issue with the effects, and a couple of notes toward the end sounded off-key. What a cute song, though. ^__^

    @Okiagarenai Yo
    ;kjsdlfskj cuuuute~ ;w; I love it, nothing I could really notice!

    @Stardust Utopia
    I love the harmonies on this one. ^__^ The harmony part starting at 2:06 sounds like it's a tiny tiny bit late but maybe I'm just nitpicking now. ^__^;; I really like this one, though, it sounds great. -nod-

    fffff, I'm sorry, will edit later, I'll have to come back and listen to the rest. ^__^;;

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