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    Sing a Song for You - 30 sentences of Reni Kaeru X Yume Barauta

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    Yume Barauta


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    Post by Yume Barauta Sat Aug 07, 2010 11:04 am

    I love X-number of random sentences type fics, so I made a nice cheesy one for my favorite nice cheesy not-exactly-crack couple. :'D

    Spoiler:

    Love it? Hate it? Confused as to why I'm writing yuri? Feel bad for Takeshi? All of the above somehow?
    Whatever you feel towards it, CRITIQUE ME.

    ...I've discovered that I'm not good at this 30-sentence thing. Ffffff.
    Kolya-kun
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    Post by Kolya-kun Sat Aug 07, 2010 12:29 pm

    i've never heard of X-number of sentences fics before, it's really neat how you can show a whole relationship in just 30 sentences OwO;;

    and i'm not really sure how to critique you... unless i got really nit-picky with the dialogue (i consider each line a seperate sentence), that's just preference really xDD;;

    i thoroughly enjoyed reading it though~
    smeen
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    Post by smeen Sun Aug 08, 2010 7:00 am

    You're way better than me at those things, Yume-tan! I really liked it!
    UtauReni
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    Post by UtauReni Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:00 pm

    O.O
    ./nosebleeds


    I LOVE IT! ^____^ Theyre so adorable ;w; Take would kill me for saying this but these two are perrrrfect ^3^ ./shot

    Brilliant writing, as well :3

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