VCV Critiques needed!

Hello ~
Recently,I have been working on my UTAU - Kiyone Yasu's VCV bank for a couple of months, but during different time periods,so the recordings were recorded differently.

..Honestly,they're just all over the place. Lazy on my part,mm. orz

I've actually worked on her for over a year,but never really got around seriously working and FINISHING her.

Aside from that,I know I most likely have to restart,or just record and edit a handful of samples.

But before I do any of that,I'd appreciate it a lot if anyone can give me a few pointers and critiques!

I seem to be rather..indecisive on how I want to record the samples and for how long. It'd be lovely if you can point out a sample that I should follow by! Also,please check if I did my oto.ini correctly. ;;

Also,she seems a bit jumpy and slurs quite a bit.

Examples : http://twaud.io/DG4
http://twaud.io/DG6
http://twaud.io/DGS

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http://www.mediafire.com/?a5spc3ddxxta13b

The link above is for her voicebank. However,not all of the samples have been recorded.

Thank you in advance!

Odd...
really... Glitchy...
Are you SURE you're fitting her to the UST properly?
And otoing her properly?
It sounds like you're doing one of these wrong.
Honestly, don't bother rerecording until you oto her properly, her voice seems good enough.

Mind taking a screenshot of some oto editing screens, please?

And telling me what you do when you apply her to a UST?

I read one of your sticky topics and found out I wasn't fitting the voice into the UST.

I redid the samples I did above correctly :
http://www.4shared.com/audio/gPAbEllY/rollinggirl.html
http://www.4shared.com/audio/THuIcAdB/19255.html
http://www.4shared.com/audio/_CpRDK1b/tsuga.html

OTO.INI

Spoiler:

Well, you're not REALLY doing the oto completely right, but it'll do.

........
You still don't seem to be doing it quite right though. XDDD
Are you SURE you cleared the STP?

Hahahaha,I thought as much.
Mmm,I'm positive. There wasn't any STP to begin with really.

...But was there a greyed out box? And you pressed "Space" in it, rather than typing 0? . 3.

Ah,I didn't type in a 0.
Goodness,I feel silly. xDD;

NONONONO YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO PRESS SPACE.
WTF, why does she sound so glitchy then D:
*goes and downloads Voice Bank to check, wishes her internet was faster*

OH,OHH.
HNNNNNNNGH.

..Her VB is quite a mess. orz

...I am glad to inform you...
That, despite her bizarre configuration that in all honesty should slur like mother-ducking heck, Kiyone is one of the most clear and unslurry VCV UTAUloids I've ever dealt with.

Shes got an ADORABLE voice too (I thought she was kinda obnoxious from your demos, but she's as soft as Shirakane Hiyori XD)

I have no idea why you are getting so many glitches...
Are you sure you cleared the preutterance and overlap, then?

Omg.
Geez,I thought she was a complete mess.

I'm so happy to hear that! ;UUU;

Hahahaha,yeah she is obvious in a handful of the samples.
Mm,I did,but I think the problem is that I put 0 or didn't space for the STP.

Yeah, for the Preutterance and overlap, you can just press the "clear" button next to them....
. 3. I really do like her, despite the missing syllables, though.

Mm,I'll be sure to remember that!
I'm now filling in those missing samples.

I can give you a download with a full VB if you'd like - though it'll still be a beta stage VB. The real release won't be until much later because I'm that slow of a worker. ;;