Wesley Bard ACT I + VCV stuff

OK

critique timez before i get all up in this VCV thing...

well... before i /finish/ =w=

mostly looking for just voice critique, but image critique is a-ok too. Just know that he /is/ an OC - suggestions for spicing him up for the "utau world" would be nice though :>

Also, note that i'm a loser who cant be bothered to put his songs in lower octaves so you get shota-voice ;A;

ALSO, are there like... specific rules for a lite VCV bank or is it just a VCV bank that's... unfinished? =n=

SONG (CV):
Dokubou.


Lynne.
http://www.4shared.com/audio/Ibrlpy09/Lynne_v20.html

Torinoko City. (his 'a' glitched but i fixed it later <___>)
http://www.4shared.com/audio/zN1vGahc/TORINOKO_city.html


SONG (Lite VCV? unfinished VCV with CV):
Lynne.
http://www.4shared.com/audio/tVlO9MBP/Lynne_v30_CV_VCV.html

IMAGE:

Spoiler:

VCV: i am totally aware that i'm DOIN' IT WRONG owo