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    Post by Zeny on Tue Apr 13, 2010 2:53 pm

    Hey, recently I made this:

    http://zenywolf.deviantart.com/art/Innocence-160526289

    It was pointed out to me by Myst that the part about "Ideal and reality" sounds too much like Hatsune Miku's "Innocence" song. I was wondering if anyone could help me find a better line. That particular part is supposed to represent the time frame between the toy's blue print phase and the time it was actually manufactured.

    I really put a lot of heart into this one, and it would be depressing if one or two similarities with an already popular song stopped it from being original. Please I ask someone to help me, as I truly love these lyrics deeply.

    I'd like to one day make an UTAU song for it in Japanese.
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    Post by smeen on Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:29 am

    To be honest...

    Leave them as they are. You were UNINTENTIONALLY INSPIRED, okay? You should never, never, never change what you have written. Never.

    But that's from my point of view, I guess others can see this different...
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    Post by Zeny on Wed Apr 14, 2010 7:09 am

    smeen wrote:To be honest...

    Leave them as they are. You were UNINTENTIONALLY INSPIRED, okay? You should never, never, never change what you have written. Never.

    But that's from my point of view, I guess others can see this different...

    Yeah, I've been told this. I just didn't want to hear "OMG RIP OFF" whenever I went around into making this into an actual song. At this point though, I don't care so much.

    Although, I would like suggestions on what kind of beat would be in the background. I was thinking of something with pianos and violins.
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    Post by Chasing Fireflies on Fri Apr 16, 2010 12:58 am

    Well, from the lyrics, it seems like it might be a good ballad-type song, pianos and violins would definitely be a good idea. And maybe a music box/glockenspiel, too. ^__^
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    Post by Zeny on Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:28 am

    Chasing Fireflies wrote:Well, from the lyrics, it seems like it might be a good ballad-type song, pianos and violins would definitely be a good idea. And maybe a music box/glockenspiel, too. ^__^

    Ah, thanks for the suggestion. Yeah, I can picture something of a "childish toybox" kind of mood. I don't really know how to explain it.
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    Post by smeen on Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:59 am

    I agree with the music box idea!
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    Post by Zeny on Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:04 am

    Ah, that sounds good. My plan is to commission someone at some point to make the background song. I have someone in mind but it'll be pricey. It will be totally worth it though.

    I'd need a Japanese translator too and someone who can guide me through the UST making process.

    This is all long term planning, of course.

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