Bodies - Another original song

When I'm bored... I write things like this.

I know it has a mature-warning, it's there for a reason

Well, what do you think?

Not really anything I'd like to hear on my iPod.
Not saying it's bad, just saying it's not my cup of tea.
(and a bit short for a 'song.')

Yeah I know... I don't use much words when writing.

c: That's silly!
What can you use when writing other than words?

I can understand what you mean, but it's silly to say that you don't use many words when you write ^^

Yeah yeah, English is not my first language okay? What I mean is: I don't like to use much words to describe feelings or happenings. I think that makes things boring. I tend to describe things with a lot less words than other people do.

That's better?

Your English is really good! O: ! I would have never thought that it wasn't your first language.

But that is much more understandable ^^
I used to think like that c:

Isn't it best to keep things concise, though? If something could be said in, say, six words, it wouldn't really be necessary to use, say, ten words to say it. In fact, all that extra stuff would just get in the way of what you're trying to say. And honestly, I don't think it's that short for a song at all.

That said, I like the kinda raw feel these lyrics have to them, it'd make a good darkwave kinda song. -nods- GJ!

@suthethird, OK, great you understand me now And my English is this good because I'm studying to become an English teacher... So it makes sense.

@Chasing Fireflies, you're right. Thanks for liking it!

I'm more of a writer type that a songwriter, so I tend to use a lot of words when describing things, to give more vivid imagery to the reader, but... Yeah, that's just me, I guess? ^^;

The song seems quite interesting, Smeen-senpai~ I'd be interested to hear the melody.

Yeah, everybody has a different way of writing things down.

I think I'll make the melody one time, but I'm waaaay too busy at the moment...