The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by xMienaiTsubasa on Sun Aug 01, 2010 1:48 pm

    smeen wrote:Meh, I might post my newest two thingies here. Feel free to use them as long as you credit me. No titles or something...

    First one, was written because loads of people seem to be abadoning their UTAU, and i was interpretating how the UTAU would feel about that.
    Spoiler:
    I am
    I am here
    Not for long
    I am here

    You
    You don't need me anymore
    So you
    You give it all away

    I am
    I am leaving
    Dissappearing
    For good

    You
    You are done with me
    So you
    You take it all away

    Going leaving going leaving going leaving gone
    Instalation
    De-instalation
    I am
    I am not
    Am I not good enough for you?

    Second one will be annoying every single person who's in this to become popular. Originally inspired by Aline (in a good way), so if she will sing it I would be very happy.
    Spoiler:
    Put on your headphones (Yeah!)
    Put on your dress (Yeah!)
    Get your microphone
    We're gonna sing! (Yes yes yes!)

    I am the best singer and you know it
    I am good looking and fine
    I will be loved all over the world
    Even the Nico-people adore me

    I will be
    The best UTAU in the world!

    I don't like her (She sounds better than me)
    I think her outfit is dumb (She looks better then me)
    I despise her (She's more known than me)
    I will defeat her! (I am number one!)

    Put on my headphones (Fight!)
    Put on my dress (Fight!)
    Get my microphone
    We are at war! (Fight fight fight!)

    Everybody is just jealous
    Because I am the best around
    I am most loved and used
    You all need to hear me

    I will be
    The best UTAU in the world!

    He doesn't sound good (I wanna get used)
    He doesn't look good (I wanna get drawn)
    Why does he have a story? (I want fanfiction too)
    Why does he have his own song? (He's not the best!)

    Putt of your headphones
    Putt of your dress
    Plug out that microphone
    And start singing already!

    Why are you complaining?
    Sing along with her
    He is your duet-partner
    Show them how you sound! (Because singing is fun!)

    I will be the best
    I will be the best
    I will be the best
    Together with the others!

    Smeeeeeeeeen I love your lyrics. I've been wanting to try to make an original song for ages but I just can't come up with lyrics at all. Would you mind if I used one of these?
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by smeen on Sun Aug 01, 2010 1:50 pm

    You can, as long as you credit me. Smile
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by xMienaiTsubasa on Sun Aug 01, 2010 2:03 pm

    Of course I will, if I ever even finish the song XP
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by Tsumanne on Mon Aug 02, 2010 4:55 am

    Meilin wrote:
    Tsumanne wrote:I just decided to try write another song with UTAU.

    4shared.com/audio/GQ8qPfwv/1_online.html

    It's... probably a lot better than my first attempt.

    It's good for an acapella but it doesn't sound like it stays in the same key, is that on purpose?

    Yes, probably. The mp3 was made from two USTs OTL
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by smeen on Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:32 am

    For those interested, some more lyrics (I guess I'll post everything I write here...):

    Beware, depressive song ahead!
    Spoiler:
    Don't look at me like that
    You knew this would not end well
    My hearts has been broken and poisoned
    It was never worth to steal

    You deserve much more than me
    I should not like or love you
    You need someone more special
    It can never return so much love

    Please just let me go
    Please just forget my love
    I am not worthy of your heart

    It is time to leave and forget
    It is not like you need me anyway
    One day you would've grown bored of me
    And then you would do the same
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by xMienaiTsubasa on Thu Aug 05, 2010 8:10 am

    ..Smeen, I'm officially collecting your lyrics in a word document XD
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by smeen on Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:35 pm

    I'm glad I can make someone happy with them... Smile
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by xMienaiTsubasa on Fri Aug 06, 2010 2:52 pm

    4shared.com/audio/IiOWvOja/I_am_test_2.html

    This is the first part of what I've done with some of Smeen's lyrics so far.. It's in Engrish, using Rion (so I apologize if her tone makes your ears bleed). Rion probably won't sing the finished version, but I don't know who will.

    Uhm, any comments and suggestions on it are more than welcome. Here are smeen's lyrics if you need them:

    Spoiler:
    I am
    I am here
    Not for long
    I am here

    You
    You don't need me anymore
    So you
    You give it all away
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by ThePianoChan on Fri Aug 06, 2010 4:42 pm

    I like it but it seems the second "I am here" Should drop the first one goes up, the second should drop..
    -dies-
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by xMienaiTsubasa on Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:19 pm

    ThePianoChan wrote:I like it but it seems the second "I am here" Should drop the first one goes up, the second should drop..
    -dies-

    XD You know.. I kind of thought so too. Now I know to change it. Thanks~
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by smeen on Sat Aug 07, 2010 5:43 am

    Excuse me, I'll be squeeing in the background...
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by xMienaiTsubasa on Sat Aug 07, 2010 11:02 am

    Okay~ I changed the second 'I am here' and added the next two verses (which have the same tune XP)

    4shared.com/audio/h-cKi-1C/I_am_test_3.html

    Lyrics:
    Spoiler:
    I am
    I am here
    Not for long
    I am here

    You
    You don't need me anymore
    So you
    You give it all away

    I am
    I am leaving
    Dissappearing
    For good

    You
    You are done with me
    So you
    You take it all away
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by smeen on Sun Aug 08, 2010 6:48 am

    Well, only the 'I am leaving' part sounds a bit messy... But I love it. Seriously.
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by xMienaiTsubasa on Sun Aug 08, 2010 7:32 am

    smeen wrote:Well, only the 'I am leaving' part sounds a bit messy... But I love it. Seriously.

    Ah, it does? I'll have to check that part. I'm glad you like it.. I have no idea what to do for backing yet.. I'm working on the tune for the last verse and harmonies for the third and fourth verses next.
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by smeen on Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:00 am

    Yes it does, I don't know how you made it... Else I could suggest something...

    Ah, you're doing harmonies too? Sounds good.

    I can't help you with the background music I'm afraid... I thought of something using piano and violin, but I don't have a clear idea...
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by xMienaiTsubasa on Sun Aug 08, 2010 3:33 pm

    Okay it could be because Rion doesn't have v sounds, so 'leaving' is made up of 'ri' 'bi' and 'n'.. But I don't know.

    I was thinking something along the lines of piano and violin too, but yeah my ideas are very fuzzy right now. So I'll finish the melody first XD
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by smeen on Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:41 am

    Oh, but why don't you use 'fi' instead of 'bi'? (Rion has that, I have her VB so I know!) It might sound better.
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by xMienaiTsubasa on Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:38 am

    Oh, yeah that might work. I'll try it.
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by ThePianoChan on Mon Aug 09, 2010 4:37 pm

    I have a song written, and the voice [ust blank/VOICE midi] Ready ^^; i just need someone to help me write/write lyrics.
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by smeen on Tue Aug 10, 2010 5:19 am

    If the lyrics can be English, I can help you. (Altough I am working on a original song to release Yuugi's Act 2...)

    I have enough time. I think...
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by smeen on Wed Aug 11, 2010 3:51 pm

    I'm sorry for breaking the rules. But i recently cleaned out my desk and found these lyrics. They're quite old, but if you want to use them you can, of course...

    Song No. 1
    Spoiler:
    Don't go away, stay close
    Don't let me stay behind
    Don't leave me on my own
    Stay with me all the time

    Too many of them have left me
    As if I were just some junk
    Some dispensable good
    Some insignificant person

    I am longing for someone near
    Someone loving and caring
    Anyone who willl stay will do
    Just stay and never leave

    Song No. 2:
    Spoiler:
    Lonely nights
    Told me how hard living is
    All these fights
    And still you are the one I miss

    All in my head
    Only these sweet memories
    Never forget
    I didn't need someone to please

    Here I am
    Regret every mistake I made
    That's all I can
    Seeking release in the blade

    Song No. 3:
    Spoiler:
    We have laughed at the countless people who were on Death's agenda
    Their mortal bodies giving up on life precisely when planned
    Whatever happened to their souls did not bother us at all
    Because we will never face such mortality
    With a digital soul living in a metal body designed by men
    We will live together for eternal bliss watching others fade away
    For Death cannot grab us, for we are immortal
    Together we will face the end of times
    They have designed us to be used as mere tools and toys
    Never would they have thought we would do more than what we were ordered too
    We are not like them, we are perfectized versions of the human being
    We are not merely here to sing, we are here to stay forever
    With our ever-growing family we will one day face freedom and eternity
    When people cease to exist, all there will be is us

    All written in my depressive period...
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by Mayuen on Wed Aug 11, 2010 3:57 pm

    The first one is my fave :3 And the third one gives me a creepy feeling (which is good xD)
    Though I like all of them 8D
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by smeen on Wed Aug 11, 2010 3:58 pm

    Aw thank you... My newer ones are all better though... xD

    These are around a year old.
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by Mayuen on Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:35 pm

    It's better then what I can do xD I can always just make up one sentence or so... Me and my never-complete-anything brain Dx
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    Re: The Original Song Collaboration Thread!

    Post by xMienaiTsubasa on Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:37 pm

    *adds those to my 'Smeen's lyrics' document* XD

    You write a lot of dark songs, don't you? XDD

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