[NEW UTAU] critique wanted~

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mainly outfit critique wanted, unless you particularly hate the hair lol~

i didn't make a full shot because i have zero ideas for the legs/shoes etc. x___x


<EDIT> added a QUICK SKETCH REF SHEET -

note: KA2 is KOUloid Type A, number 2.

and uhh... those boots... don't ask. i ran out of ideas xDD and i think i try too hard to match lul

<EDIT 2> name change: Tiffani West ;P
which makes the belt buckle 'United Kingdom' just because everyone wants it xDD

i'll be working on english recordings tomorrowwwww~~~
hopefully the accent will shine through ;o;

No critique... I love her outfit.

Uh, at first I though "UK" states for United Kingdom and I was like "cool, an English UTAU" but then I understood it was her name.

That was not a critique or anything, sorry. Just ignore me.
I think I'm in random status (I just was checking random.org).

Now, seriosly, she has a young fighter style I like. Like if it were a young "Claymore" (with brown hair).
I doubt you know that manga/anime, so just ignore me there again, but that made me curious about eye colour.

Aaa, i'm glad you both like it ;DD

I doubt you know that manga/anime, so just ignore me there again

I've heard of Claymore, but i've never watched/read it~ is it good!?

that made me curious about eye colour.

i was thinking maybe a purple? just to help balance out the green x33

I also was a little disappointed that 'UK' wasn't for 'United Kingdom' XD

She's cute. I really like her shirt and her hair is cool too.. Uhmm, just one question. Where is the ribbon in her hair coming from? Is it like a ponytail or something?

I also was a little disappointed that 'UK' wasn't for 'United Kingdom' XD

obviously i'm going to have to make her english compatable or something xDD

Where is the ribbon in her hair coming from? Is it like a ponytail or something?

Yeah, it's a teeny little ponytail in the back~ i'm working on a front/back ref sheet right now ;o;

The Claymore anime is... not that good.
The manga is (or maybe was, your mileage may vary) one of the best around... but it's a bit violent so i can't recomend it to you, kids.

But that has nothing to do with the image, sorry. Let me try to explain it better.
Your image hasn't the bloody essence of the manga at all but the strong, hmm, determination part. Maybe with that charming tomboy scent.
Probably the serious pose and a bit the "kinda martial arts ribbon/hairband" is magnafying me, hmm, an action girl image.

But she's quite cute! Maybe you could try a more cheerful pose next time to show her more femenine (if that's what you want).

love her outfit ^^