Okay, guys, I REALLY need you to rip this apart - Tsugai Kogarashi

Yeah, yeah, this is my third thread about this.
But it's a totally different topic and I really need help because I want this to be the best LOKE and Anaka cover ever but I think Osamu's drunkness somehow rubbed off on me, so I couldn't even hear if it was on synch. I need you guys to listen to this and tell me exactly what's wrong, how to fix it, yadayadayada...

http://www.4shared.com/audio/MWAorlIV/tsugai_test_1.html
(Yeah, yeah, It's low quality. I'll fix it when I actually know it's on synch.)

Things I refuse to fix:
*Lack of reverb. I hate using reverb.
*The few English Rs. One, LOKE's Rs sound move like English Rs than Ls anyway. Two, the L files for the Rs I left in were completely messed up, and my throat is too screwed up to replicate Anaka's voice for the triphones to rerecord. So, if you say anything about me being a totally white weeaboo, I'll skdfjoisojdfoijsdifjjjgfffff.

Everything else? Fair game.
Well, except for stuff that won't help.
Like "LOL PUT LOKE IN THE OCTAVE 1 LOL"
That really, really won't help.

UST by Sango, plzkthnx

And as I said, TEAR.
IT.
APART.
I want walls of text telling me all my failures and how to fix them.

Anaka's kind of quiet and overpowered by LOKE. They're both perfectly audible and lay in the karaoke neatly, though.

>using Ls
...wait what. How is that ever a good idea. D:

The Rs aren't severe enough to point out, so all around good job. :U