Fluent breathing help?

Edit: I made a newer version. I added more parts and fixed some problems. Plus, I removed the gender blend so the breathing'll fit his voice more ^^'

http://www.4shared.com/audio/5xO3X2UM/_online.html

My try at the breathing-ness ;w; Does he sound fluent-ish? I had a lot of trouble with it so I really need everyone's opinion OJZ


This is Luke's g+3 and bre 75. It did vary at some places since I played around with the bre and gender-blend XD The song is HadanoP's Gekka Hime no Uta.


I'm very open to constructive crit so it's okay to be honest and say to me "OH @%$^*&&* THIS SOUNDS HORRIBLE!" XD I just wanna get some feedback from fellow UTAU users :3

Edit: I'm sorry the breathing doesn't fit Luke's voice.. I sound very feminine when breathing for some reason Owo' I'll fix that when I figure out how...

Definitely sounds like breathing to me! I am not even sure how to do that. non

Thank you!! ;A;

If that isn't breathing, I don't know what is, good job :3

You should make a little video or something showing how you did it. I'd love to know. non

Thank you soo much everyone!! ;A;

@Hello8bit: I might... But I'm not very good at it yet... But thanks for your suggestion!! X3

NNNNGH THAT UST.
WHERE. WHAT.
WANT. *shot*

xD Anyway, sounds pretty good.

Haloheroine wrote:NNNNGH THAT UST.
WHERE. WHAT.
WANT. *shot*

I'm making it from scratch since I couldn't find the ust XD There might be a vsq or midi out there though :3 And thank you!!

...
How do you do that?
o_o;