Fireflies (Trem, English)--First Verse w/pitch bends

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    Post by Trempush on Sat Jun 19, 2010 4:52 pm

    That's right, I jumped on the bandwagon. :D

    I love this song anyway, though.

    So here's the first verse:
    4shared.com/audio/R_-O4Ny5/firefliespv1.html

    Feedback would be welcome. Any suggestions would be welcome, too. On anything, really.

    EDIT: The song is 'fireflies' by Owl City, if you don't know. sorry, I forgot to mention that.


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    Post by CDchan on Sat Jun 19, 2010 11:31 pm

    i hear some clicks D:
    but other than that i think it's nice c:
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    Post by Haloheroine on Sun Jun 20, 2010 1:13 am

    Some clicks and she sounds really robotic just because of lack of dynamics. Dx
    But the words are really understandable, so its all good.
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    Post by KURENAI on Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:34 am

    First off...I LOVE OWL CITY.

    Second off...Trem is really starting to grow on me. =D

    I agree with Halo to the extent that there's not any emotion YET...but I'm sure you can fix that. :3 Just a little tweaking and it'll be perfect.
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    Post by Trempush on Sun Jun 20, 2010 7:04 am

    Awesome, thanks everyone!

    I'll add some pitch bends etc. when I can to give her some more emotion. I wasn't sure if I should add it or not, but now I'm going to Smile And I'm going to try to figure out why those stupid clicks keep happening, ugh... I can usually get rid of them, but these ones elude me Sad

    *runs off to edit*
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    Post by Trempush on Wed Jun 23, 2010 7:32 pm

    All right, pitch bends! And stuff!

    I would have more, but UTAU's freaking out on me right now, so I'm just going to post what I have...

    4shared.com/audio/dh2D1nIy/fireflies.html

    I tried to imitate the pitch bends that the Owl City guy does in the original song--does she sound convincing?

    (sorry for the double post...)
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    Post by Ezri on Wed Jun 23, 2010 8:05 pm

    Wow, she sounds good! ^^ I love how understandable she is! The only thing I thought was weird was that it sounded like she said "tea-drops" (like...drops of tea. XD)
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    Post by Trempush on Wed Jun 23, 2010 8:12 pm

    Ezri wrote:Wow, she sounds good! ^^ I love how understandable she is!


    Thank you! Smile

    Ezri wrote:
    The only thing I thought was weird was that it sounded like she said "tea-drops" (like...drops of tea. XD)

    yeah, her 'rr' sound that I tacked on at the end there decided to go AWOL on me at the last minute, so I'm going to have to re-render that... thanks for mentioning it though, it helps to know that other people hear it, lol.

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