critique please ;u;

i was trying out a new effect i found in sony vegas.. (hardcore VST plugin) which i thought sounded cool, but idk. i put the videos with subtitles there because i wasnt sure if you could figure out what tomi was saying without them xD;; did i overdo the effects?

In my opinion, it's a little overdone xP

The effect is cool, but makes Tomi's voice all staticy. I couldn't really understand her, so maybe you should lower it a little ^^'