Here I go again with the english works-in-progress, lol.
So I was fiddling with some loops that I found on a free loops website, and...somehow it turned into a song about an android.
Because no one's written a song for Vocaloid/UTAU about an android before, right?
*COUGHCOUGHKOKOROCOUGH *
Anyway.
So this android is supposed to be very basic. She's not supposed to feel, or express emotion. She's not that advanced.
But when she actually comes into contact with a human for the first time, she witnesses his emotion, and later she starts to feel it herself. She calls it as a 'Human Sound', because that's the only way the engineers that made her could get her to remotely understand the phenomenon of a feeling.
The song doesn't really have much of a plot, other than that.
Here's the lyrics:
I was told I'm incapable
Of expressing emotion
conscious thought was beyond my grasp
I thought that this was true.
Then I met a human being,
Someone I wasn't meant to see,
he smiled and spoke kind words
and for the first time I got to see...
(bridge)
In my first few hours of running,
I was told of a strange force,
that came from deep within the living,
they described it as a 'human sound'...
(chorus)
and I heard it for the first time,
from a stranger,
I never ever will forget the warmth,
as it echoed through my sensors,
and reached inside,
to a place that I never knew,
a Human Sound
a human sound...
He told me of a world outside
of the building I'd never left,
'take my hand,' he said, and we ran
without ever looking back...
(chorus)
and I heard for the second time,
from withtin
I never ever will forget the warmth,
as it echoed through my sensors,
and came outside,
from a place that I never knew,
a human sound...
a human sound...
(refrain)
some say I'm better than my makers,
some say I'll never compare,
but when I hear the Human Sound,
I know that I have barely begun...
and it comes from diferent places,
every time,
and I never ever will forget the warmth,
as it echoes through my sensors,
I feel alive,
and it always seems to feel new,
this human sound...
this human sound...
I love the Human Sound...
(end)
AAAAAnd here's the very first four lines put to that loop that started this whole mess:
http://www.4shared.com/audio/7czJ6Vl6/Human_Sound_PV1.html
Never mind the space after her first set of lyrics, that's where the next set is going to go...
ANYway.
So what do you guys think? Should I stop before I embarrass myself, or do I have something here?
And does anyone have ides for a PV? 'Cause at the moment I'm thinkin' that I want to collab and make a PV with this song, when it's done. That's a ways off, but yeah...
Any feedback would be welcome.
So I was fiddling with some loops that I found on a free loops website, and...somehow it turned into a song about an android.
Because no one's written a song for Vocaloid/UTAU about an android before, right?
*COUGHCOUGHKOKOROCOUGH *
Anyway.
So this android is supposed to be very basic. She's not supposed to feel, or express emotion. She's not that advanced.
But when she actually comes into contact with a human for the first time, she witnesses his emotion, and later she starts to feel it herself. She calls it as a 'Human Sound', because that's the only way the engineers that made her could get her to remotely understand the phenomenon of a feeling.
The song doesn't really have much of a plot, other than that.
Here's the lyrics:
I was told I'm incapable
Of expressing emotion
conscious thought was beyond my grasp
I thought that this was true.
Then I met a human being,
Someone I wasn't meant to see,
he smiled and spoke kind words
and for the first time I got to see...
(bridge)
In my first few hours of running,
I was told of a strange force,
that came from deep within the living,
they described it as a 'human sound'...
(chorus)
and I heard it for the first time,
from a stranger,
I never ever will forget the warmth,
as it echoed through my sensors,
and reached inside,
to a place that I never knew,
a Human Sound
a human sound...
He told me of a world outside
of the building I'd never left,
'take my hand,' he said, and we ran
without ever looking back...
(chorus)
and I heard for the second time,
from withtin
I never ever will forget the warmth,
as it echoed through my sensors,
and came outside,
from a place that I never knew,
a human sound...
a human sound...
(refrain)
some say I'm better than my makers,
some say I'll never compare,
but when I hear the Human Sound,
I know that I have barely begun...
and it comes from diferent places,
every time,
and I never ever will forget the warmth,
as it echoes through my sensors,
I feel alive,
and it always seems to feel new,
this human sound...
this human sound...
I love the Human Sound...
(end)
AAAAAnd here's the very first four lines put to that loop that started this whole mess:
http://www.4shared.com/audio/7czJ6Vl6/Human_Sound_PV1.html
Never mind the space after her first set of lyrics, that's where the next set is going to go...
ANYway.
So what do you guys think? Should I stop before I embarrass myself, or do I have something here?
And does anyone have ides for a PV? 'Cause at the moment I'm thinkin' that I want to collab and make a PV with this song, when it's done. That's a ways off, but yeah...
Any feedback would be welcome.